Post by Rene on Aug 22, 2011 22:55:09 GMT -5
Well hello :3. I've been lurking in the OOC channel for a little while and have been wanting to introduce myself, but I didn't have the courage to post my character until just now. I really want feedback for her, so please let me know if you guys think she's alright for use.
So here goes:
Background: Rene is eighteen years old, a high-ranking soldier by trade in her home country. She is highly trained in short-range combat and is skilled with melee weapons and martial arts; however, she is inexperienced with long-range weapons and has no supernatural powers such as telepathy, etc. She appears in the clearing one evening seemingly with a slight case of amnesia; she knows who she is, but she does not know where she is or how she got there. However, something about the clearing seems familiar.
Appearance: 5'7", about 115 pounds. Very fit in appearance, but boasts a bit of a masculine frame with broad shoulders and small hips. Her face is plain in appearance; by no means is she a supermodel. Rene has fair skin and straight, black hair. She wears a short bob that hangs just below her chinline; its somewhat ragged layers suggest that she cuts her own hair. Her bangs hang below straight, somewhat prominent eyebrows. Her eyes are of a bright, penetrating green, and almost always are fixed in a expressionless stare, almost as if they are disconnected from her body. She is almost exclusively seen wearing ink black pants with a pair of black, knee-length lace-up combat boots.
Rene's pale skin and ebony hair is reminiscent of Snow White; however, her body is marred by many unsightly scars inflicted from various training exercises and spars during her time as a soldier in her homeland. The most nasty are a large puncture wound running from the center of her chest out to the small of her back, and what appears to be an imprint of a whip on the palm of her right hand that spirals up to her forearm.
Rene remains topless in public. To be clear, her choice to do so is not of a sexual nature. In fact, due to her training as a soldier, Rene is staunchly asexual. Rather, it is a statement of anatomic and gender equality, and she often rather naively expects others to silently respect this.
Demeanor: Rene has a doting, quiet personality. Although she is quite friendly and easy to talk to, she enjoys solitude and spends many hours of the day alone and out of sight.
Rene is one of few words; however, she is full of ideas and is quick to defend them. Although she strives for civility when discussing politics, ideologies, and other topics of the sort, her patience for intolerance and prejudice, especially towards women, is short. Therefore, it is probably best not to talk about such things with Rene at all, lest her audience be forced to endure one of her rambling, politicized rants.
So here goes:
Background: Rene is eighteen years old, a high-ranking soldier by trade in her home country. She is highly trained in short-range combat and is skilled with melee weapons and martial arts; however, she is inexperienced with long-range weapons and has no supernatural powers such as telepathy, etc. She appears in the clearing one evening seemingly with a slight case of amnesia; she knows who she is, but she does not know where she is or how she got there. However, something about the clearing seems familiar.
Appearance: 5'7", about 115 pounds. Very fit in appearance, but boasts a bit of a masculine frame with broad shoulders and small hips. Her face is plain in appearance; by no means is she a supermodel. Rene has fair skin and straight, black hair. She wears a short bob that hangs just below her chinline; its somewhat ragged layers suggest that she cuts her own hair. Her bangs hang below straight, somewhat prominent eyebrows. Her eyes are of a bright, penetrating green, and almost always are fixed in a expressionless stare, almost as if they are disconnected from her body. She is almost exclusively seen wearing ink black pants with a pair of black, knee-length lace-up combat boots.
Rene's pale skin and ebony hair is reminiscent of Snow White; however, her body is marred by many unsightly scars inflicted from various training exercises and spars during her time as a soldier in her homeland. The most nasty are a large puncture wound running from the center of her chest out to the small of her back, and what appears to be an imprint of a whip on the palm of her right hand that spirals up to her forearm.
Rene remains topless in public. To be clear, her choice to do so is not of a sexual nature. In fact, due to her training as a soldier, Rene is staunchly asexual. Rather, it is a statement of anatomic and gender equality, and she often rather naively expects others to silently respect this.
Demeanor: Rene has a doting, quiet personality. Although she is quite friendly and easy to talk to, she enjoys solitude and spends many hours of the day alone and out of sight.
Rene is one of few words; however, she is full of ideas and is quick to defend them. Although she strives for civility when discussing politics, ideologies, and other topics of the sort, her patience for intolerance and prejudice, especially towards women, is short. Therefore, it is probably best not to talk about such things with Rene at all, lest her audience be forced to endure one of her rambling, politicized rants.